tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post1683498224408318859..comments2023-08-02T05:06:28.437-04:00Comments on Having Writ: American Loire Songsister AEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-15172274318710300002007-12-10T22:44:00.000-05:002007-12-10T22:44:00.000-05:00Thanks, Mariacristina. If my calculations are cor...Thanks, Mariacristina. If my calculations are correct, I was 17 at the time of the memory this is based on. I'm glad I conveyed some of that.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-34522834070626645572007-12-10T20:54:00.000-05:002007-12-10T20:54:00.000-05:00You create a scene of youth and adventure. Your po...You create a scene of youth and adventure. Your poem brings me back to my traveling days, and stirs my wanderlust.Christine Swinthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04498327260166892705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-18185797023446011262007-12-08T08:45:00.000-05:002007-12-08T08:45:00.000-05:00Thanks, J.Hello, crimsonflaw, and thanks. You kno...Thanks, J.<BR/><BR/>Hello, crimsonflaw, and thanks. You know, I never considered anything but past tense since it is based on a memory of a real event. I may have to play with what it would feel like in a different tense, just for fun.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-29273511364648955732007-12-07T23:03:00.000-05:002007-12-07T23:03:00.000-05:00its beautiful, the melancholic ending in a smile. ...its beautiful, the melancholic ending in a smile. <BR/><BR/>i loved the line with ´´ nothing to prove ´´. and the way you used the past tense here...crimsonflawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16846132238371790709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-56949479281392023482007-12-07T21:16:00.000-05:002007-12-07T21:16:00.000-05:00I really like the picture you paint here.I really like the picture you paint here.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-28261413062799119202007-12-07T21:02:00.000-05:002007-12-07T21:02:00.000-05:00Hi, aka danny - I've got a real soft spot for just...Hi, aka danny - I've got a real soft spot for just that sound.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-469213779145802642007-12-07T17:21:00.000-05:002007-12-07T17:21:00.000-05:00Saxaphone memories, you can't beat them.Saxaphone memories, you can't beat them.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.com