tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post2690902130509122346..comments2023-08-02T05:06:28.437-04:00Comments on Having Writ: Transparentsister AEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-57363429681064656082008-09-10T17:56:00.000-04:002008-09-10T17:56:00.000-04:00Hello, Maria. - When I pay attention, I'm happy wh...Hello, Maria. - When I pay attention, I'm happy when nose-pickers is the worst I see!sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-1531924311760954152008-09-10T16:26:00.000-04:002008-09-10T16:26:00.000-04:00Oh, yes...can't believe how many nose pickers ther...Oh, yes...can't believe how many nose pickers there are out there driving around in their cars...Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05049511202014141182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-69523003033983281202008-09-09T07:28:00.000-04:002008-09-09T07:28:00.000-04:00Hi, Jo. Thanks.Hi, Jo. Thanks.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-18408388805312352012008-09-09T06:14:00.000-04:002008-09-09T06:14:00.000-04:00I've thought this so often, that sense people have...I've thought this so often, that sense people have that they are invisible as they pick their noses....like the cars have smoked glass windows. Very nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-88897921272575389932008-09-09T01:22:00.000-04:002008-09-09T01:22:00.000-04:00Thanks, susan. In our cars, it is the job of the ...Thanks, susan. In our cars, it is the job of the passenger to gawk so that the driver can concentrate on driving. we think that is a fair division of labor. if only more people did that!sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-84599562144835259892008-09-09T00:13:00.000-04:002008-09-09T00:13:00.000-04:00I get so annoyed with these folks who concentrate...I get so annoyed with these folks who concentrate on everything but driving! Like this.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-20017745417347013692008-09-08T23:08:00.000-04:002008-09-08T23:08:00.000-04:00Thanks, Nathan.Hello, Lirone. I started with the ...Thanks, Nathan.<BR/><BR/>Hello, Lirone. I started with the invisible line earlier in the poem, but decided I liked it better at the end.<BR/><BR/>Hi, Gautami. thanks!<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Sleepypete. "Mr Mobile" - I love it. I have friends who have named their GPS devices. On named hers "Penelope."<BR/><BR/>Hi, Kimberlee. I'm afraid we're on opposite sides of the continent but I think this is pretty universal in urban areas these days.<BR/><BR/>Hello, artpredator. I'm usually the passenger, so yes, of course, I'm watching!<BR/><BR/>Thanks, christine.<BR/><BR/>Hi, twiches, and thanks.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-59146394055364656362008-09-08T21:59:00.000-04:002008-09-08T21:59:00.000-04:00I agree; I love the inclusion of minute, mundane d...I agree; I love the inclusion of minute, mundane details. Nicely done.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-80930915966314316832008-09-08T19:33:00.000-04:002008-09-08T19:33:00.000-04:00All the observations the narrator makes, catching ...All the observations the narrator makes, catching people unawares. Funny, and clever.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-9132780406724955782008-09-08T14:16:00.000-04:002008-09-08T14:16:00.000-04:00great vignettes!have you been watching me??great vignettes!<BR/><BR/>have you been watching me??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-80421373038095737132008-09-08T13:06:00.000-04:002008-09-08T13:06:00.000-04:00I don't know where you live, but it sounds like we...I don't know where you live, but it sounds like we have commuted along the same stretches of road. I think this is a great description of the horrors that we have to see on a regular basis. :)Kimberleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787970553045999626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-24610228139562060482008-09-08T12:59:00.000-04:002008-09-08T12:59:00.000-04:00Lol - so, so true. There's not much that will insp...Lol - so, so true. There's not much that will inspire sheer terror in me when I'm driving but the sight in the rear view mirror of someone on the phone or doing their makeup does it every time.<BR/><BR/>I've seen :<BR/>The Mom failing to control the kids<BR/>The MercMan who was reading his paper in the outside lane doing 60 in the 70 area (before rocketing past a few minutes later at 90+)<BR/>And tonight, Mr Mobile taking 10 minutes to do a "Hi Honey, traffics bad, see you later"<BR/><BR/>I like my satnav - I used to struggle with a list of directions in Big Letters on a piece of paper. However, Satnav takes all the fun out of being lost :-)Sleepypetehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11143274290029186546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-57966403304835886632008-09-08T11:58:00.000-04:002008-09-08T11:58:00.000-04:00I love the great detailing. As if I watched him my...I love the great detailing. As if I watched him myself..<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/09/what-does-one-call-it.html" REL="nofollow">what does one call it?</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-16497518779251549262008-09-08T11:50:00.000-04:002008-09-08T11:50:00.000-04:00A lovely collection of vignettes - and I do like t...A lovely collection of vignettes - and I do like the strength of that last line - so many people do assume that they're invisible in their cars!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-71782757868861630342008-09-08T10:22:00.000-04:002008-09-08T10:22:00.000-04:00I love the details in this and the narrator's pers...I love the details in this and the narrator's perspective "Did you know..." Great title too. This was a good read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com