tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post3332729966531556647..comments2023-08-02T05:06:28.437-04:00Comments on Having Writ: Midsummer in Ozsister AEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-20947485345772268072009-07-12T01:38:12.516-04:002009-07-12T01:38:12.516-04:00Hi sister AE
I've decided to pass on an award...Hi sister AE<br /><br />I've decided to pass on an award to you.<br /><br />Here's <a href="http://eneri-hot.blogspot.com/2009/07/blog-award-from-angie.html" rel="nofollow">my post about it</a><br /><br />Blessings<br />Ireneirenehttp://eneri-hot.blogspot.com/2009/07/blog-award-from-angie.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-14091304214778259802009-07-05T11:36:17.779-04:002009-07-05T11:36:17.779-04:00thanks, James.thanks, James.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-29425038401298723322009-07-05T08:27:48.613-04:002009-07-05T08:27:48.613-04:00Very nice. I could really hear the speaker's v...Very nice. I could really hear the speaker's voice in my head. I love the bit about sitting down to think up the next column.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-58627776115308396902009-07-03T07:00:32.255-04:002009-07-03T07:00:32.255-04:00Hi, irene. Thanks.
Glad you like it anthony.Hi, irene. Thanks. <br /><br />Glad you like it anthony.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-55457307842147804012009-07-03T03:44:50.643-04:002009-07-03T03:44:50.643-04:00Fun and a great flowing narrative.Fun and a great flowing narrative.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-58730783836494885692009-07-03T01:08:56.461-04:002009-07-03T01:08:56.461-04:00Rollicking fun..like folkloreRollicking fun..like folkloreirenehttp://eneri-hot.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-69609505675592942442009-07-02T22:18:48.010-04:002009-07-02T22:18:48.010-04:00Thanks, Dana. I re-read Nick Bottom's lines i...Thanks, Dana. I re-read Nick Bottom's lines in Midsummer Night's Dream and found quite a chap, indeed. As each character in the play-within-a-play was announced, poor Nick was so eager to best any other at each one! <br /><br />Hello, Erin. Thanks! It still makes me smile at my own audacity.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-18798806278637495212009-07-02T22:01:36.132-04:002009-07-02T22:01:36.132-04:00Bottom in Australia! Brilliant!Bottom in Australia! Brilliant!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-32421261042496383792009-07-02T21:44:48.907-04:002009-07-02T21:44:48.907-04:00The jack of all trades reference is a wonderful pl...The jack of all trades reference is a wonderful play on words. I also really like the notion of being more like a wall than the wall itself. There's a lot of great sound in this poem, too, slant and internal rhyme throughout that isn't too loud, just loud enough to support the tone of the poem.Danahttp://mygorgeoussomewhere.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-17164903283591923402009-07-02T21:18:48.471-04:002009-07-02T21:18:48.471-04:00Thanks, Kristy.
Hi, strattonm. Thanks for the k...Thanks, Kristy. <br /><br />Hi, strattonm. Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-77147642116516846722009-07-02T19:10:35.773-04:002009-07-02T19:10:35.773-04:00You did a fine job of conveying meaning by showing...You did a fine job of conveying meaning by showing, not telling. You wrote in such a way that what you were communicating was obvious even if the terms weren't.<br /><br />That takes skill, and not a little bit of humility. Most people want to tell how much they know. You showed with gentleness.<br /><br />I thoroughly enjoyed this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-12208115676419398222009-07-02T17:58:58.649-04:002009-07-02T17:58:58.649-04:00yes, the language was a lot of fun, woop woop!yes, the language was a lot of fun, woop woop!Kristy Wordenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06318953032004738866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-280016109785622852009-07-02T14:23:51.187-04:002009-07-02T14:23:51.187-04:00Hello, Donald and Lawrence. Thanks so much to eac...Hello, Donald and Lawrence. Thanks so much to each of you!<br /><br />I tried to verify the Australian slang as much as I could from this corner of the US, hoping it would be just enough to give the right flavor. <br /><br />Thanks, Nathan. I'm glad it works for you.<br /><br />Hi, Gautami. Thanks for coming along for the ride.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-16055106518337240912009-07-02T13:07:07.360-04:002009-07-02T13:07:07.360-04:00It puts me right in there!
equus asinus asinusIt puts me right in there!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/07/equus-asinus-asinus.html" rel="nofollow">equus asinus asinus</a>gautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-71437834096207592422009-07-02T11:37:33.538-04:002009-07-02T11:37:33.538-04:00There's a great use of dialect and narrative h...There's a great use of dialect and narrative here!Nathanhttp://disorder1313.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-28793229282533347752009-07-02T09:42:16.651-04:002009-07-02T09:42:16.651-04:00a lot of local flavor in this poem to enjoy. slan...a lot of local flavor in this poem to enjoy. slang works great in poetry writing because it really connects narrator to reader, granting a familiarity level that the reader would otherwise be absent of. enjoyed<br />-lawrenceLawrence Gladeviewhttp://beatnikprose.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-51925546847872235222009-07-02T09:11:59.849-04:002009-07-02T09:11:59.849-04:00The interesting thing about poetry, and much over ...The interesting thing about poetry, and much over looked, is its ability to educate. One can get out of it a life instruction based on their own experiences as well. (Been there done that!)You have taken us on a journey of metaphor and British slang that is a pleasure to read as well as a glimpse into pub thinking. Well done!Donald Harbourhttp://woodennickel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-3836721828119112012009-07-02T08:07:39.045-04:002009-07-02T08:07:39.045-04:00thanks, angie!thanks, angie!sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-22793574.post-52158399309441360482009-07-02T07:27:26.902-04:002009-07-02T07:27:26.902-04:00oh, just perfect!
I'd like to join them for a...oh, just perfect!<br /><br />I'd like to join them for a cold one, too!angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.com/2009/06/28/donkey/noreply@blogger.com