[a poem inspired by the Monday Poetry Stretch at The Miss Rumphius Effect.]
The Plan
She waited until the noon hour
to climb to the top of the tower.
How silly! she thought,
that the others had fought,
for a space in the hot, stuffy bower.
Up here a cool breeze was at hand,
and the view of the country was grand.
But an unlooked for teem
of rain spoiled her nice dream
of the afternoon picnic she'd planned.
[The challenge was to produce a bouts-rimés poem where the rhyming words are provided by someone else. The words given were hour, tower, thought, fought, hand, grand, teem, dream. Since the poem form I selected (limericks) required additional rhymes, I tried to find out if adding additional end-words and rhyme-words was OK, but couldn't track down the answer. So I did it anyway and had fun - will someone fill me in on whether this is still in the spirit of the bouts-rimés?]
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7 comments:
Thanks so much for playing along with our stretch. I do think it is in the spirit of the form. No one said it could only include those words for the rhyme scheme. Besides, I love your limerick. I hope you'll come back and join us again.
Regards,
Tricia
Hello, Tricia, and thanks. I'll definitely try some of the future stretches.
pretty clever
Very nice... I love to rhyme as well, and I think you did a fantastic job constructing the story around those word choices!
Michele sent me to say hello,
~S :)
P.S.
I too have an eclectic taste in nearly everything, and share a few other of those items in your About Me. ;)
~S
Thanks, Shephard. Come back for more of almost anything sometime!
Thanks, Reflekshins.
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