[I haven't been writing for the prompts at Weekend Wordsmith for a while, but I do look at them nearly every week. This week, the prompt "road" struck a chord.]
Oil-and-Rock Roads
My bike followed the oil-and-rock roads all over town,
smelly and sticky from the new coating,
leaving black spots on the frame,
and on my white socks.
My feet walked black-top main roads,
baked hot and soft in the humid summer heat.
My mom's car thumped along the concrete
of St. Louis Avenue, cracked and patched
from the never-ending freeze/thaw/bake cycle.
My grandad's hands laid the brick underneath
Gallatin Street, hidden below asphalt, except
for an occasional worn spot where the red
peeked through from the past.
My back turned to all those roads,
I sped east to the land of granite curbstones
where no one had heard of
oil-and-rock roads.
Monday, January 19, 2009
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10 comments:
excellent point of view... the familar and a new adventure brewing...
thanks, omb.
This is beautiful! I love the imagery. I know well that freeze/thaw/bake cycle.
Thanks, SlyGly!
Wow... Great word-crafting. Thanks for sharing this!
Hope I can lure you over to the MEET n' GREET going this (and every) weekend on my blog, after taking over from Michele! It'd be great to have you a part of the fun!
http://netchick.net
Hi, Tanya. Thanks, I'll stop by.
Greetings – This is a very engaging piece -- the journey through teh generations... enjoyed it!
I invite you to stop by Image & Verse again for a visit, or just to say hello.
...rob
Thanks, Rob. I will stop by when my work lets up a bit.
The connection with your grandfather: powerful.
Hi, Carmi. Thanks. I never knew him, but as a kid I heard about him working on that road back in the Depression. In good times he was a cook.
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