I haven't been writing any poetry I can share, so I tried a different approach. This is a work in progress, but I think I like where its going. Check out what others have to share at the Monday Poetry Train Revisited.
I'm Not Sorry
I thank the summer
for the heat that makes me sweat
and wilts the houseplants.
I perversely appreciate the high humidity
that brings mold on the wind,
into my nose,
making me sniffle and sneeze,
and my eyes water.
I bless the dry spells
that make the crispy weeds crunch
beneath my feet
and fill the air and my mouth with dust.
It is unapologetically summer
and no Back-to-School / Halloween / Christmas
sale in the stores
will convince me otherwise.
I dream of wading
barefoot along the dappled edge
of the creek,
hat off and sunburned,
and I show up late for work
with no remorse.
7 comments:
Love the ending!
Thanks, Stan. Me too.
Very nice. (=
Prose is good anytime of day and this is a perfect tribute to summer! I really like this and if it is alright with you I would like to share it on my facebook.
Have a great day!
mine is here
http://www.moorebloglife.com/2009/08/10/poetry-train-40/
Thanks, Amethyst.
Hello, Amanda. Thanks for asking about sharing this piece. It is OK with me if you do so, as long as you credit it with my blog-name and website:
sister AE
http://havingwrit.blogspot.com
We are having the same kind of weather you describe here.
I liked how you ended it.
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I found this to be quite entertaining THANKS!
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