Thursday, March 06, 2008

Up and Under

[So I happened across Laura Salas' website, where she offers a weekly 15 words or less prompt. Check out the picture and the other poems (in today's comments, on a post there tomorrow). I had fun with this, which is what Laura says we should be doing.]


Up and Under

Swing high
as the spring
buds on tree
branches, but watch
out for mud
underneath!



4 comments:

writerwoman said...

Very youthful and energetic.

sister AE said...

Thanks, Sara. We had a park next to our house when I grew up. I was intimately familiar with the swingsets.

laurasalas said...

So glad you stopped by to participate!

I love your subhead, by the way. Some of life's lessons are wonderful; others are better ignored or actively denied!

sister AE said...

Thanks, laura. I had fun and will be back. I'd almost forgotten about the sub-head. I wrote it when I set up the blog (when I think I had a fever). I think I'm lucky that's what is there!