Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Traffic Haiku

I put this together in my head while I was on the way to work this morning. No, I did not write it down while the car was moving.

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Traffic Haiku

I can only go
as fast as the car in front;
honk at someone else.




6 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

that made me smile!

sister AE said...

Thanks, Julia.

Carmi said...

Found your link on Michele's and decided to follow it home. How glad I am: your poetry is delightfully thought-provoking.

I grew up in Montreal, so traffic always dominated our daily agenda. This haiku is so on the money.

I look forward to reading more!

sister AE said...

Thanks, Carmi. You're welcome any time. Only once did I have to sit in rush-hour traffic just outside Montreal and I can say it rivals that of my area!

Xinh said...

So much truth in 17 syllables.

sister AE said...

Yup. Glad you stopped by, Xinh.