Tuesday, August 21, 2007

Traffic Haiku

I put this together in my head while I was on the way to work this morning. No, I did not write it down while the car was moving.

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Traffic Haiku

I can only go
as fast as the car in front;
honk at someone else.


Crafty Green Poet said...

that made me smile!

sister AE said...

Thanks, Julia.

Carmi said...

Found your link on Michele's and decided to follow it home. How glad I am: your poetry is delightfully thought-provoking.

I grew up in Montreal, so traffic always dominated our daily agenda. This haiku is so on the money.

I look forward to reading more!

sister AE said...

Thanks, Carmi. You're welcome any time. Only once did I have to sit in rush-hour traffic just outside Montreal and I can say it rivals that of my area!

Xinh said...

So much truth in 17 syllables.

sister AE said...

Yup. Glad you stopped by, Xinh.