I put this together in my head while I was on the way to work this morning. No, I did not write it down while the car was moving.
Traffic Haiku[photo from lugnutandhendrix at Photobucket.com]
I can only go
as fast as the car in front;
honk at someone else.
as fast as the car in front;
honk at someone else.
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that made me smile!
Thanks, Julia.
Found your link on Michele's and decided to follow it home. How glad I am: your poetry is delightfully thought-provoking.
I grew up in Montreal, so traffic always dominated our daily agenda. This haiku is so on the money.
I look forward to reading more!
Thanks, Carmi. You're welcome any time. Only once did I have to sit in rush-hour traffic just outside Montreal and I can say it rivals that of my area!
So much truth in 17 syllables.
Yup. Glad you stopped by, Xinh.
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